Look at my loser!

YES, THIS IS TRULY A WONDERFUL PIECE. I DO ENJOY THAT THE CHARACTERS ARE STILL DETAILED WHILE AT THE SAME TIME BEING MORE SIMPLIFIED. I ALSO ENJOY THAT, UNLIKE MOST OF YOUR PIECES, THERE IS A BACKGROUND WITH OBVIOUSLY SOME HARD WORK AND EFFORT PUT INTO IT. I HIGHLY APPRECIATE THAT.

THIS PIECE DOESN'T REALLY SEEM THAT HEAVY-LYING ON THE ORIGINALITY ASPECT, SO I DON'T REALLY KNOW HOW TO RATE IT. THERE ISN'T ANYTHING TO ORIGINAL ABOUT IT, BESIDES THE THINGS FLOATING IN THE AIR. I THINK THAT GIVES IT SOME GOOD BALANCE, BUT IT COULD BE IMPROVED UPON OVERALL.

YOU'RE TECHNIQUE IS ALSO GOOD, AND AS I CAN SEE YOU HAVE TRIES A NEW STYLE YOU WILL NEED SOME TIPS AND TRICKS. I CAN DEFINITELY GIVE YOU THOSE. I'M FAIRLY CERTAIN IT HAS BEEN STATED BEFORE, BUT THE HANDS ARE FAIRLY VARYING WHEN IT COMES TO SIZE AND SHAPE. BUT SOMETHING PEOPLE HAVE NOT MENTIONED IS THE HEAD SHAPE. I FEEL LIKE IT DOESN'T REALLY FIT THE STYLE, AND THE SUFFICIENCY COULD ALSO BE IMPROVED UPON FROM THERE. OTHER THEN THAT, EVERYTHING LOOKS PRISTINE.

I WAS ACTUALLY SURPRISED AND IMPACTED BY THIS WORK HEAVILY, YOU CAN VERY CLEARLY SEE THAT THIS IS A ROMANTIC PIECE AND THAT IT IS A WELL DONE ONE. THERE IS ALSO NO NUDITY, WHICH MAKES THAT EVEN MORE CLEARER. I HIGHLY ENJOYED AGAIN, THE CHANGE OF PACE.

I ADORE SEEING YOU IMPROVE, AND I HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE TO. I THINK THIS WAS A VERY GOOD PIECE, ESPECIALLY FOR SUCH A DIFFERENT STYLE THEN NORMAL.